In class we have been learning about show not tell and we had to think of a person, animal or a object that we could write about mine is my goats, Rodney & Dell-boy.
First time I saw ……. WILD
I was so accelerated with excitement I couldn't stop jumping up and down like a maniac!
I start to squeak and squeal as I start spotting the Manic Animals bumping and fighting each other.
Rodney and Dell-boy would not stand upright as soon as my grandads trailer unexpectedly opened the old, ranky door on the base side these Jumpy lunatics quickly leaped out to sprint up the sloped hill to play fight in a 2 person war! .
As They start to calm down at a turtle pace I extend my arm and began patting Rodney’s pearl, creamy skin with luscious, soft, beautiful fur as soon as I stand up I lean to the side and their Dell-boy was pushing for a pat there I was patting his smooth, soft, cuddly fur before I know It’s 7 o'clock. “Dinner time,” mum says .
Wow I’ve been up on this hill patting the pets for 3 hours, see you next time, Then I scream now you can play fight with each other! - By Millie
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