Millie's Persuasive Writing

In room 11 we have been setting goals to achieve in our writing, to help, learn more about punctuation. We had to choose what subject we would like to persuade in our writing and plan about it  I choose Should students who commit cyber-bullying be suspended from school?

Planning !

Should students who commit cyber-bullying be suspended from school?

Students that cyber-bully should be suspended, here are my reasons why: You can cause depression, Anger, Sadness, make them doubt themselves and if you are just labeling, saying mean and nasty things it come to serious things like suicide.

Just think, if you wouldn’t say those unkind, nasty things in person why would you say it online. Suspend the bully, tell them “It is wrong,”. Is it because you think your in your room all alone behind a screen, thinking it is funny to cyber bully. What you put online like being unkind, disrespectful and swearing, you are  preparing yourself for the person, the teacher ending up seeing this unnecessary and norty comments you put online ; it’s not right.  

Make a choice, would you let them stay at school to bully other students online?

“No,”.

Tell them to take time off school for a couple of days at least, let the parents talk some sense into their kid, tell them “ You're being inconsiderate and cold hearted to others ; Maybe they'll stop !