The purpose of renovating rm 11's useless area is because it is a waste of space to be able to innovate rm 11's space we created and persuasive piece of of writing. After we had accomplished that we had to create a design of what we would want it to look like In this task Emmy and I decided to create a 3D model of what it would look like here it is .
Dear board of trustees,
I would like to tell you why Rm11 needs an outside learning space?
Reason 1- Waste of space.
Why is it a waste of space?
It’s only a walkway where people litter, it’s a waste of space.
Imagine, imagine if we had a learning space where we can work better, enjoy the sun while we learn and work. It’s better than being stuck in rm11 with 27 kids all smushed into 1 classroom. In this useless, boring, colourless area we have dead trees, useless drains in the middle of the space. It’s unsafe!
Reason 2- UNSAFE
Why is rm11’s useless area unsafe?
It’s unsafe because there are broken bits of concrete , 1 useless drain in the dead center and no roof.
It has spikey plants growing through the cracked tiles while rm 11 students hurt themselves over the prickly balls falling from the trees.
Conclusion
Room 11’s dull outdoor area is really colourless and has no space to learn. It would be a better place to learn if it was colorful and fun which will encourage us to learn better and if we were sad or angry you can look at/on the bright colourful side of things.
Thankyou :)
Millie


