Red skin writing

In class rm 11 have been learning how to write a persuasive piece of writing in this persuasive piece I am trying to persuade Mr Billings to handout redskins for amazing writing here is my writing. Hope you like it !

Why room 11 needs redskins?

Would we work better?

Yes,

We would never fall asleep again.We would have redskins to survive, without them we would die! It’s an endless situation. It’s a battle, a struggle, There’s a purpose to this elegant, preshious stirp of amazingness, it’s like water. A sugar rush is what children need to work, without it we would get a disease called redskin apocalypse. That deathful disease is deadly, do you want a teacher to be blamed for this cause of an action?

Best teacher appreciation.

Would Mr Billings become the best teacher ever ?

Definitely,

Any teacher who gives out redskins will be so much more cooler,appreciated,exciting and hilarious teacher in the whole university it’s a win win situation. Kids would come sprinting up to you and be your slave only for your signature.The word would spread across the whole world, Mr Simon Cowell will even come to NZ especially for your autograph, even a selfie.

Briber

Would Mrs Billings be able to bribe us into doing the best writing,reading,maths etc, for a redskin?

Yes,

Rm 11 would do anything to survive we would:

• Put in a good word for him to the principal to make sure he gathers more money.
• Make sure his kids get into an amazing uni.
• Book him a holiday in hawaii.
• Make him have hair whenever he wants.
• Be his slave, get food for the family, for the pets,elderly's anything for that one REDSKIN!!

Thank you   -    Millie :)